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一篇小作文
贴出一篇这学期写得比较好的作文,是单元测上完成的。
My Favorite Season
My favorite season is spring. Because I can have picnics in the park. There will be lots of food. (这里应该是句号)Like bread, biscuits, cola, candy and lots of many other things.
We can plant trees in spring. My great-great-great grandma plant a tree, and now, it was (显然,时态完全不知怎么用)a giant tree(这句我喜欢,好象有了点英文思维了)! We can play in(老师改成了under,但他说我就是要在树冠里玩,象tree house一样) that tree.
In new year, my mother and father will give me lots of money. So then, I will be happy.
Spring is warm and rainy, I like spring!
[ 本帖最后由 zhangji7411 于 2010-6-25 05:03 编辑 ] |
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