快乐地学习英语

luck1

上周五好运学完了treasures-G4-Unit2-theme3,周末写了一篇日记。请各位英语能手给批改一下 。


Dear Diary:

I have been playing Plants VS Zombies, I have: Pea shooters~ Sunflowers、Cherry bombs、Nut walls、Pumpkins、Frost pea shooters、Man eating flowers、Frost mushrooms、Sun mushrooms、Double pea shooters、Bubble mushroom、Corn cannons、and Grave eating moss.
I defeated every zombie that ever put foot on my land, and it wasn’t half fun! I went from level 1 to level 12.

It was the funniest video game, I wish that you have got the chance to play this game.

I guess that I’m out of paper any way, so I guess that this is:
THE END!

melaniezeng

真的很棒呀,我儿子1岁9个月,也是从小双语,现在开始输出了,希望长大了和你儿子一样棒.

qsqsqsqs

我把楼主家公子和我女儿关于39 Clues新的通信发在下面：

2010年12月4日

Dear YN,
     I am dying to talk about the 39 clues, I haven’t been on line for a while now, so please tell me all the things that happened , and please give me some of the new information that you have ok? Write back soon!
                                               Sincerely
                                                  “L”

qsqsqsqs

2010年12月7日

Dear "L",
    Um, sorry, but I don't have new information about the 39 clues. I've finished a new book. HOLES. It's really good. You'll like it. It's about boys, too. I'm not telling you what it is about, though. Come on! READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
                                                        Sincerely,
                                                             YN

qsqsqsqs

2010年12月11日

Dear YN,
    OK, OK! I’ll read! Happy? Now, you said you wanted to talk about the 39 clues, Aye? So let’s talk. Do you think that Amy and Dan can defeat the Vespers? Will they be killed? That would be like “SO COOL!” So tell me if you want to talk about the 39 clues now, ok?
Reapply!
                                           Sincerely
                                               “L”

qsqsqsqs

2010年12月12日

Dear "L",
    I'm reviewing the whole thing, and it's really helping. This time, I noted that Vespers did seem to lurk in the shadows. You should read it or listen to it again, too, you know. Now everything makes sense. I think these bunch of authors are really great! They organized everything so perfectly! Reread, and you'll comprehend a lot more. And, that bonus meterial in the end of each recording is really cool, too. It gives us a lot of clues. I wonder what kind of connection The Man In Black have with Bae Oh. He seems to know Irina Spasky, too. At first I didn't take much notice, but now these questions keep popping up in my head. Strange, right? And I think it's a pity Irina died. She could have made it through the Gauntlet. I wonder what Isabel Kabra's face would look like! Ha! And sometimes I feel sorry for Irina. Her son died and she loved him so. At first I hadn't taken any notice of the memories, but now……
    Everything is so complicated. I hope the new series come up soon. I hope I'll find more answers. Bye for now! Promise me you'll reread. It's really good!!!!
                                                                    Sincerely,
                                                                         YN

qsqsqsqs

女儿午饭时向我表示——在我向她谈了Holes的基督教寓意（尤其关于：处于社会下风的人或人们，往往只是因为机缘巧合上的不够幸运，美国黑人如此，Stanley家族也如此，然而上帝面前人人平等，他们不应因此受到不公正的待遇）后——，她说固然她读Holes没有读到那么深，但在Holes和39 Clues之间她更愿意向我推荐后者——也即希望我也读读后者。

其实39 Clues的作者不乏名作者，比如第9部的作者Linda Sue Park就有一部获得纽伯瑞金奖的作品A Single Shard。

myskybaby

你们的女儿这么厉害了？？羡慕中。。。。

myskybaby

不好意思，我看上面的信感觉都是你女儿自己写的？模仿两个人？是吗？？

luck1

好运正在看《holes》，看到一半儿了。
12月14日他看《holes》看的都不想睡觉了，很喜欢看。半夜，我被他屋内的灯光晃醒。过去一看，他正躺在被窝里看《holes》。我看表才3凌晨3点钟。问他怎么起这么早，他说看错点儿了，以为6点钟了。

最近快期末考试了，他们班的作业出奇的多 。这周都没时间学treasures。