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继续贴元元的英文作业。红字部分是老师批改的。
Alice in Wonderland
Once there was a girl named Alice,
Who wondered about prince and palace.
She wondered (wandered )through her garden one day,
And saw a white rabbit on his way.
She ran after him and grabbed his hand,
Then she found herself in wonderland.
Everything here was surprisingly beautiful,
And Alice thought it was simply wonderful.
(Beautiful and wonderful do not rhyme.)
The sea glimmered and sparkled under the sunlight,
Like thousands of twinkling stars shinning at night.
Beside the sea, beneath the trees,
Daffodils fluttered in the breeze.
Then she met the Cheshire Cat,
Who loved to wear a funny hat.
Next, she bumped into crazy March Hare,
That had some birthday cakes to share.
“Everything here is totally new to me!
I’ve never been invited to a hare’s tea!”
Then she saw the queen’s guards,
Which were made of paper cards!
Curiously, Alice walked in close,
And saw they were painting a rose.
(Close and rose do not rhyme.)
“Why are you painting the rose red?”
“Because if I don’t, I’ll lose my head!”
Then the queen herself suddenly came,
And asked Alice to a hockey game.
“But I don’t know how to play!” she said;
Then the queen shouted, “Off with her head!”
Alice started to run fast,
Away from all the cards she past.(passed).
She ran past the moody queen,
And the big garden that was green.
Home, she wanted to find,
But the guards were right behind.
“I simply must get out!”
She closed her eyes to shout.
“My dear Alice, what are you saying?” asked her sister.
She was in her own garden, with no guards behind her.
“There is something that you don’t understand;
I just took a little trip to wonderland!”
[ 本帖最后由 hlp525 于 2012-4-13 14:52 编辑 ] |
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