持之以恒 水滴石穿-----01年2月的Annie英语点滴

bianyr01

周六周日的网球课占去了两个下午，annie在作业只好在周五晚上就开始写。周记要求写一篇介绍校园的文字，annie写了一个晚上。在这里晒一晒。

中文：

我那美丽的校园

     你知道那个坐落在柳州路旁的校园吗？那是我们美丽的校园——天津XX小学。走进正门，映入眼帘的是A座教学楼上方金灿灿的七个大字：天津市XX小学，它们在阳光下闪闪发光，犹如七颗闪耀的繁星照亮着我们的眼睛。往左看，一棵高大的杨树向我们伸出一根根枝桠，来欢迎每一个同学。

     向右走几步就来到我们的操场。下课时，同学们像一群被关了很久的小鸟一样，飞快地跑出教学楼，三三两两地在操场上跳绳、跑步、踢球……寂静的操场一下子变得生机勃勃了。我们的操场可真热闹啊，一个个同学都生龙活虎、你追我赶；我们的操场可真快活啊，每个同学脸上都洋溢着欢快的笑容；我们的操场可真是一个快乐、喧闹的天堂啊，同学们在操场上玩耍，和煦的暖阳在我们的头上照耀着，真像一幅美丽的画卷。

    走进教学楼里一听，两侧的教室传出朗朗的读书声，同学们回答问题的声音也会时时地钻进我的耳朵。再看看那一间间教室：教室前的黑板变成了知识的海洋，同学们身后的黑板报化作了彩色的花园，而一章又一章的优美文章，在语文书上汇聚成一条条知识的河流。

   下课时，同学们在楼道墙上的宣传板报前学习中国的历史，他们说着、笑着、指点着：“看呐，那是唐朝大诗人李白的诗！”“快来看呀！这里画的是秦始皇兵马俑！”“看呐看呐！那个是智慧的诸葛亮！”

   我们的表演都是在宽阔的报告厅里进行的。伴随着美妙的音乐，小演员们在台上时而蹦、时而跳、时而唱、时而笑，观众们也时时抛来赞美的掌声。这里也是音乐的天堂，一串串音符像活泼的天使，把我们领进这里——我们的报告厅。
   我们如同一只只可爱的小蜜蜂，在这片知识的花海里采蜜，一天又一天，我们在这里长大，这里也是我们的家。我爱我们美丽的校园。

周日早上，annie看过Jane的作文，激发了英文的写作热情。开始写一篇叫In Charge的东东，我帮她也晒出来。可能是现在时最熟悉，annie不听我的建议，坚决用的现在时来写，同时文中的小错也保持了原样，没有修正。

Chapter One

“Please! Let me go with you!” I beg my sister.
“Oh, no! you don’t. I always look silly when I am with you.”
“I will be good this time. Just let me go with you.”
“No! How many times did you look at me like that? And, each time when we arrived there, you looked like a little monster.”
My name is Amy, Amy Moddy. I’m nine. Whom I am talking to is my annoying big sister Dina. But god, she is eleven, and she hates me though I’m her sister.
“Well, only thirteen times, I guess…… ” I say quietly.
“What’s up?” Mom comes.
I look back, “Mom! Oh, mom! Dina doesn’t want me to go with her to sleep over.”
“No, I look silly when I’m with her!” Dina yells.
“That’s only thirteen times……” I say in a low voice.
“That’s what I’m telling her all the morning!” Dina now yells at mom and me.
“Let me get things straight. You want to go and you don’t want her to go, right?” Mom asks, “Dina, let me talk to you. And Amy, pack your stuff.”

Chapter Two

Five minutes later, we are standing beside our car.
“Oh mom, I forget my teddy bear!” I yell to my mom.
“But it’s in your toy box happily and ……”
“It is a She. And she is not in my toy box. She should be on my bed!” I yell angrily, “Let me get her!” Before my mom answers, I run into my house to get my teddy bear, Beary.
Suddenly, the door bell rings and there comes my mom’s voice, “Amy, time to go!”
I run to the door. The door flung open, then I run to the car. Before I know it, Dina comes to me and Beary suddenly slips from my hands. Dina steps on Beary’s body accidently. The next thing I know is —Dina is in the hospital with a broken arm.


后面的章节待续。。。。。。

[ 本帖最后由 bianyr01 于 2011-3-6 12:15 编辑 ]

qsqsqsqs

女儿读了英文故事，说写的不错。她说她看或听过的两个故事是用现在时写的：最近听的Despicable Me和以前读的Mallory on the More。她说故事中，滑倒受伤部分，过程介绍省略稍多。

bianyr01

九本大部头的Sammy Keyes系列故事终于听完了，不迷恋于在车上听故事，上下学的汽车接送终于可以改成骑车接送了，虽然冷一点，但上下学路上的时间可以大为缩短，避免了在可恶的堵车城市中的路上挣扎，回归低碳生活，我非常高兴。

今天Annie写作兴致高涨，完成了N多的作业后，晚上又写了自编小说的第三章。我原样发上，请各位高人BBMM指正。

Chapter Three

“Say sorry, Beary.” I make Beary say sorry to Dina. “Sorry, Beary so sorry……. ”
“Get that monster bear out of this room! I hate it! IT! Oh, my poor arm…….” Dina looks at me as if I was the one who did it.
“But you stepped on her and ……”
“Get that bear out!”
“And you have to say sorry too!” I yell back.
Suddenly, mom’s voice comes behind me, “I have two bad news and one good news. Which one do you want to hear? ”
“Let me think—the good one!” I say to mom.
“No the bad ones. I want to hear how bad they are.”
“But—”I look at mom.
“Amy, Dina’s arm is broken. Let her choose.” Mom looks at my teddy bear weirdly.
“I choose the bad ones!” She looks at me as if she just won.
“Ok……one, the doctor tells me Dina hurts her leg too. So she can’t walk right now. And two, I’m going to New York to work for two days of —Well, just work.” My mom finishes talking and Dina looks just like a dork now: her mouth opens big and her eyes look like popping out of her head.
“And the good news is Amy will help you, and so do grandma and grandpa.”
“Grandma and Grandpa are here? Yay! Beary, are you happy? Yes!” I hop around the room.
But suddenly, I jump on something soft with an “Ouch”.

wymghjss

又学习了一遍，读一遍就有一遍的收获

bianyr01

今天我才知道，annie故事中的小姐俩是老鼠。我还纳闷，为什么插图中的小孩都歪着嘴呢，原来是主人公不是人类啊。看来是老鼠记者的书读多了。昨晚作业多，还要猜古诗词谜语，这章还没写完，有啥算啥吧。

Chapter Four

“You know what? I just figure out what they mean.”Mom is standing in the room straightly as a tree.
“What?” I ask.
“The Chinese words—Xue Shang Jia Shuang—They mean a disaster after a disaster……”Mom’s voice becomes softer and softer.
“Amy! You hit my leg! I think it’s broken.” Dina cries, “Mom, what did I tell you? She is a little MONSTER!”

“Oh! My poor big baby!” A familiar voice comes at the door.
I turn around. Before I can stop myself, I say, “Grandma! Grandpa! What do you bring me?”
“Amy!”
“That’s OK, dot---dot----how do you say that?” Grandma asks mom.  
Grandma’s English is not so good. You have to know I am a half Chinese, half American mouse. And of course, Grandpa and Grandma are Chinese mice.
“Daughter, d-a-u-g-h-t-e-r! Daughter.” Mom answers her.
“Oh, yes! Daughter. Amy, sorry, I brought gifts for you. But—”Grandma stops.
“She forgets your gift. Because the big baby’s arm is broken, She cried all the way and forgot the fruits in the Taxi.” Grandpa adds.
“Grandma looks at Dina, her mouth open widely, “Baby! What’s wrong with your leg?”
Before Dina can answer, Grandma can’t stop her tears.




[ 本帖最后由 bianyr01 于 2011-3-11 14:57 编辑 ]

勤劳小蜜蜂

插图的风格跟老鼠记者有一拼呢

很有些原版故事的味道！

超赞呀

lulumary

天哪 真漂亮 简直太棒了

bianyr01

为周日上午的聚会以及周日晚上和偶像姐姐的聚餐，annie在周六跑班的缝隙中奋力写完了作业。周日早早到达了和蜜蜂琪琪的集合玩耍地点，上蹿下跳大玩特玩，由于下午要上网球课，annie提早和大家告别，叮嘱我：你一定告诉我他们多玩了一会儿就各自回家了啊！别告诉我他们还接着玩了啊。阿Q精神小小地泛滥了一下。2个小时的聚会后，annie竟然用4个小时来回忆，意犹未尽溢于言表。
晚上和考上布朗大学的偶像姐姐聚餐，相差8岁的两个孩子并排坐在一起窃窃私语，我很好奇annie和姐姐交流了些什么。后来，姐姐告诉我，annie仔细询问了姐姐在小学时的学习好恶，对比了自己和姐姐4年级时的共性和差距，也问明白了中学学习的主要内容，以及出国考试的诸多程序。回家的路上，annie一直若有所思，我本以为她在思考自己的前途。结果，annie悠悠地说：妈妈，您就下岗，让妮妮姐姐的妈妈教育我吧。
看来，annie把我当成她成长路上的不利因素了。唉。

子川妈

才看到，安妮的插画真漂亮，乍一看像贴纸呢，强烈要求妈妈把图片放大，让大家好好欣赏！

lulumary

原帖由 bianyr01 于 2011-3-14 13:27 发表
考上布朗大学的偶像姐姐

布朗是今年秋季入学么？ 那她是提前申请的那批就录了 牛孩中的牛孩呀  

SAT多少呀？ 是美女吧 老美超爱录美女

原帖由 bianyr01 于 2011-3-14 13:27 发表
对比了自己和姐姐4年级时的共性和差距，也问明白了中学学习的主要内容，以及出国考试的诸多程序

这些我们也想知道 能818么