小一Alois的英语学习之旅

loringui

The farm was like a great garage of many good things. The house was very good too. The furniture was good. The electricity wires were very good. The telephone wires were very good. The furnace leading to the chimney pipe was very clean and interesting because there were lots of different types of cobwebs in there. Even the scientists couldn’t figure them out. The stone was very good. And all the things were very good. They were also clean and tidy, except the things in the attic, which were already used and covered with dust: like cups without handles and bottles without corks. Rodents always scurried into their house, year after year, because they had lots of good things in their refrigerator. And the homemade bread they had was the best in their community. They were very happy about the farm, but the television was not good. The screen always looked gray, and there was nothing on the screen except the channel number. And nothing was on the radio except the “buzz” sound of bad reception.
One day, Mrs. Hummer said, “I’m fed up with that television. Maybe we should get a television worker to come and fix it.” It was a good idea. Everyone in the house liked that idea. Even the dog nodded his head. He was very smart. And now he could do some easy mathematics. They got a trainer because they were rich enough to hire a trainer to come once a week. And they used up so much money that they got a little bit poor the next day.
So one day the television workers came. After the check, they said “Hmm, I think there’s nothing wrong with the television. The television system is very good. We should have fixed that.” So they tried two days. But on the third day, they gave up. “We couldn’t fix this,” said the leader of the television workers, “It has to be replaced with the good one.” So they bought a good one. And the television worker came. “Where do you think we should put it,” the leader of the television workers asked.” “Just left of the bedroom window and beside the balcony. Just there,” said Mrs. Hummer. “There?” Said the television workers, and drew a square. “Very good, very good,” said Mr. Hummer. So after half a day’s time, the wires were connected, the screws were screwed in, and all the parts were done. And from now on, they even bought a new television that stuck to the wall. And wires are all connected to the TV and radio system. So all they had was a very nice farm by the end of the year.

The end of the story.

This was a very happy twelve months on the farm. They worked hard for one year to supply all the goods on the farm. And they had turned a dull farm into a lovely wonder-garden where every flower contains good things in it. By the time Mr. and Mrs. Hummer were old and retired, Frederick went to Harvard University. And by that time, the baby was in middle school. And the dog was being borrowed by the next-door neighbor, Mr. Grump, who was a policeman. And he used Hunter for a police dog. And the next day, their farm was in the newspaper. The headlines said: “Hummer’s magical farm”.

loringui

Alois写这本书是为了赚钱。所以很卖力，呵呵。有人愿意买马？小朋友定价2元，后来觉得便宜了说定价6元。又觉得贵了，因为数学书是3元，后来想想语文书是23元。最后不知道定价多少。有愿意买的告诉我一声，并告诉我愿意出几钱。我给他记上。希望大家多多捧场！

candyxiao020

小Alois太厉害了，我都看呆了，让点点姐姐来好好学习一下。要卖的话，我第一个出价吧，5块钱，要小作家签名哦！

子川妈

小Alois不仅有作家的潜质，还有商人的头脑，真好。

从小家伙的小说中读出了海量阅读的成果，继续加油吧，希望能真的出书，到时一定来捧场~

子川妈

点点妈已经出价了啊，那就继续拍，我出6块。

忘了点评下。小说语言地道，描述细致，情节也交代得很清楚。若能把farm的magic之处突出渲染下，那就更完美了。

学而妈妈

可以在论坛征集插图，这样就做成完美的章节书了

先做成带图的电子书，在论坛卖，以后再以纸制书的形式出版。
电子书可以售50金币，妈妈将获得的每个金币兑换0.1元人民币给版权人

loringui

非常感谢各位的大力支持！今天读给Alois听，他非常激动。立马要爸爸打印好多份给大家。我告诉他你们都买了电子档。
记录了大家的出价，我会付给他。让他尝到通过自己的努力赚钱。
很赞同学而妈妈通过推广也可以让孩子学到很多。谢谢大家都建议，会读给Alois听，让他自己决定怎么推广。
目前打算参加6～9岁朗读比赛，来推广自己的小书。已经读好了，上传link
http://www.tudou.com/v/DD1DSFf7x4g

[ 本帖最后由 loringui 于 2010-10-29 14:14 编辑 ]

学而妈妈

我打印了Alois的小说，拿回家，告诉海琳这是一个小弟弟写的小说，征集插图作者，以后合作出版。她很激动，说：“全国的人都可以看到illustrator Hay Lin?“ 我说是啊，她马上跃跃欲试了。我说要征集啊，优选

loringui

太好了啊，海琳画的画好可爱的：）

xxbzh

楼主的公子真是了得！妈妈付出很多，孩子也是出类拔萃的。

我今年才发现论坛，对宝儿的启蒙也很晚。不过，孩子只要有兴趣，起步晚也不怕。

爬了楼主的高楼，发现一点，楼主教子很严格，听说读写一起来，作息表很好。我太松散，儿子回到家就先自由地玩一会才写作业，写完作业练完琴有时间就画画，到最后该睡觉了，总没有时间朗读。

希望从今以后也让他跟读，并听写。