小一Alois的英语学习之旅

loringui

在论坛潜伏了很多年了，学习了很多好东西。在Hi5的号召下，打算记录一下一年的学习过程。希望得到各位睿智的爸爸妈妈的指导！
2009年10月16日，开始此次学习之旅的第一站。
先纪录目前的状态：
Alois, 男，2009 年9月开始读一年级
听：现状：看了大量动画片。能听懂大部分的动画片。但是听纯mp3还没开始。
       目标：喜欢听chapter book的mp3.
说：现状：刚刚开始请外教，跟外教交流无障碍。但是语句有很大的语法问题。
       目标：没有明确要求。坚持每周一次外教课，增加可交流的话题。
读：现状：刚起步看桥梁书。读了第一本Junie B Jones. 觉得很有意思。就是自己默读
       目标：坚持大量阅读，亲子共读，共同讨论。问题妈妈的口语跟不上，一起学习，一起进步！
写：可以口述很多小故事。不会写。刚开始听写scott系列幼儿园级的小书
       目标：坚持每天听写一本scott的小书。可以开始写一些小文章。
问题：看书速度很快。一本Junie B Jones. 半小时之类看完。不知道看懂了没有。
          纯听mp3, 好像听不太懂，那位指导一下应该从那个启蒙比较好
Hi5及各位睿智的爸爸妈妈能不能看看是不是有什么问题。一年后再来看，有没有做到。
共读清单
Frog and Toad 精听
Oliver Moon and the Broomstick battle 泛读

[ 本帖最后由 loringui 于 2009-10-20 13:04 编辑 ]

缘起缘落0059

给楼主加油来了，给宝宝加油。相信一年后会有不小的收获

晓露

ALOIS好棒啊，同是小豆包，来学习取经！

loringui

Alois 口述，妈妈记录。Alois说了差不多一个小时，因为妈妈很多听不明白，反复确认。希望哪位高人指点一下。中间有很多问题，不知道怎么改正。
How I Have a Trip with the Pirates
by Alois
One day, when I was at the beach, I have heard a sound. It was just a small singing I thought. It went "Yohoho… Arrr…" I don't know what it was. But I sure have heard it clearly when it was being close. It was a big ship of lots of sails. And it was a skull and crossbones. And it was a pirate singing. I went to see a little bit. It really was a pirate ship.
I rushed to tell my mother. But she was already asleep on the beach chair and snoring. I went to tell my father. But my father said you were silly boy. Now it was already no pirate being here now. Dad just didn't believe me. So I just rushed a little into the sea.
The pirate ship was closing in. Suddenly, the pirate ship was close on land. The pirate captain said we have a trip to bury a box of treasure. So he said, "We have no one but you to help me find the perfect digging spot to bury the treasure." So I have gone to the pirate ship. I thought dad or mom wouldn't notice me. So I went to pirate ship.
First, captain said, "You can't say thank you or tug in ourselves because we are pirates." It is time to get lunch. The captain said, "Chef, bring me the pork." and so chef did. And then he said, "Give me the beers." We ate and ate until it was time to rest. I thought pirate wouldn't rest. So, I bring out my soccer ball and tell them how to play soccer. First, I kick it to captain, then captain kick it up high. It went up so high and then rippppp!!! The ball had made a hole in one of the sails. The captain shouted, "Don't let the hole!" And a crew brought towels and wall-papers and paper. Soon the hole was finished. We played a little more.
We meet another ship. Once I told the captain, the captain grabbed the binoculars. Then he said, "Get ready to fight!" The captain ran down to the galley. He pulled the steering wheel then it was being close to the ship. When the ship got side by side, the captain yelled, "Hurl the anchor." We climbed aboard and we took all weapons again. Some have big knives, some have guns, some have strong sticks. The captain blow the horn "Huhu,,hu,hu". Then we started to fight.
Two pirates with strong sticks ran to the people aboard the big ship. Bangggg!!!The two pirates have hit over the two people over the ship. Then it started to be wild too men ran with guns, ran to the deck stand. Six people have been dead for them. Then six men with knives ran to the captain with the big strong knives. Just as the pirate wants to hit the captain, the captain swings his big stick and bang. One pirate has fail down the big ship and right into the middle of the old pirate ship. Then captain pirate swings his big knives and his strong stick. He has no gun but... He ran through six men and he has to hit them. He swings his knife and two men has fail down. They haven't been died but too dizzy. Then as just the pirate captain finished his knife, he swing his strong stick. Three mens have died and the last one of the crews has raised his hands. Just as the captain finished his big work, six people under the pirate ship, two of them have guns, and four of them have big knives. Then pirate with the gun shoot off and four of crews on the other ship are very very dizzy. The pirate captain said, "You keep fighting, I'll do something else." He just takes the men and walk as slow as he can down the ladder and right into the old pirate ship, take them down to galley. He had no way. He bring a string from his box then he ties the two men up down a big log. Then he ran as fast as he can to the big ship. One of his pirate have already died. He said, "You two, please take down to the galley. Then shoot the cannon every one just one time, then back onto the deck. Remember." The crew did. The two of crew people have fired the first cannon. But this ship was bigger than their old pirate ship. So it did not hit the old pirate ship. Back on the deck, four of the pirate crew and the pirate captain people have already done the other captain. The pirate captain takes the other captain just threw him into the middle of their old pirate ship. Then back on the deck, the five of the pirate crews have three of them have guns and two has knives. One of pirates was a little bit scared and he climbed up onto the crow's nest. He watching on the other pirates and just as he climbed his way on to the crow's nest, five of other ship's crew have died. All the ones have die, other ones are dizzy. He has only one people on the ship left and that was the people who raises his hands. The scared pirate jumped off the crow's nest and ran to the captain pirate and asked, "Do we won?" The captain said, "Arrr… yes!" Then he said, "Help me with the people who are dizzy and the people who are died. Take the people that dizzy string them onto a log. And the people who are died, throw them down to the big blue sea. I just heard this. I ran out of the old ship's galley and ran aboard the deck and just did what the captain said. Then all the job was all done, the captain pirate said, "One more job, take the skull and cross bones flag just aboard this ship." Then when we were done, it was time to go to bed.
It has a little bit more time. So the pirate captain drives the ship away from the old pirate ship. Then he yelled, "Gunners, take your places!" Then when we are all done, then he yelled, "Fire!" The gunners just fired the cannons, just as the old pirate ship with the people dizzy on board sink.
Then it was really time to go to bed. Just as I went sleep, I have a dream. I was wondering where mom and dad was being. Did they miss me or they already snoring, or did they go to summer vacation without me? I thought and thought. I was too tired; I just closed my eyes and went to sleep. Just a few minutes, I was already snoring because I was too tired. Then all the pirates jumped up and yelled, "What's that?" They see nothing then they went to sleep again. But all my snoring, the pirates didn't get too much sleep. Then that's how the night ends.
Tomorrow is the time to bury the treasure. We ate breakfast quickly. Then we found the perfect digging spot, the captain pirate said, "Bring out your shovels." Then we leaped out of the ship and right into the digging spot. We dig and dig. Just as the pirates have buried into the hole, the captain pirate make a note all about them with me. He quickly drive the ship and they found a light house. Just as the side of the light house was a big tree. They dig and dig into the tree's trunk. Then they put the treasure map into it. When they covered it back up, the captain pirate carefully draw a skull out of this big knife. He left the skull and left eye patch on it. Then they could open when they found it.                              

The End.  Sep 17th, 2009

babywhale

好棒啊！居然可以听写了！可以看桥梁书了，真是不错！

loringui

听：Toad and Frog,1 Spring 通听了一遍。讨论了大概的意思。然后听一句，不看复述一句。应该比较简单，打算接下来toad and Frog这个系列听完。
说：
读：看了Oliver Moon and the Broomstick battle 的第一章，讨论了大概的意思。不知道是不是有点难了。有不少生词。不知道怎么样算读懂了，挑书也很难的，在图书馆里借的
写：听写了一小本scott

loringui

听：Toad and Frog,2 story. 精听 泛听 Junie B Jones book1
说： 外教课，关于halloween
读：看了Oliver Moon and the Broomstick battle 的第二~四
写：听写了2小本scott

[ 本帖最后由 loringui 于 2009-10-21 10:02 编辑 ]

dorothy1

这个小马真厉害！ 好棒啊！我总觉得你们在海外吗？是个海外马吗？小马过海啊！不简单！

loringui

听：Toad and Frog,3 the lost botton. 精听
说：
读：看了Oliver Moon and the Broomstick battle 的第五~七 结束整本书
写：听写了1小本scott
问题，看书速度比我快。也没有讨论，基本就是陪他看。说挺好看的，比junie B Jones那本好看
不知道算不算亲子共读了

[ 本帖最后由 loringui 于 2009-10-21 10:01 编辑 ]

hyf246612

佩服之中，一年级就这么厉害了，我们还只能看看简单的绘本，进来学习一下，我们是同级