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再发一篇小子写的英语作文,
希望大家多多指导
My weekend
My weekend was great!
First,we went to the supermarket. We bought many things there. We bought salad, pear, oil,lobster,
chops, cheese, milk , pizza, and hamburgers! Then we ate icecreams! Then we went to the book shop.
We bought four books for me, they are about science. Then we went home and had a great meal
of salad,hambburgers,pizza, and cheese!
My weekend was the best ever!Do you like my weekend?
我感觉通篇就是个流水账
写了好多 then ,应该写成 first ,second ,third------then . |
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