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小子的第一篇作文,原汁原味贴出来,错了也不改了 :
(最近四川地震,他最感动是那个手机留言的妈妈和孩子,反复要我讲给他听,每次听到母亲爱的遗言,他就泪光闪闪。他和我说,希望我们领养这个孩子。他还用英语把这个故事写下来:)
one day,四川 7.8 earthquake is coming,in a house ,a mother is like that(旁边画了一个趴着的人),a lot of doctor came and touch her nose ,and then they say,this people is died ,and then they find other people ,but the first doctor say:why she like so,they went backto the women ,and the first doctor touch her stomach,there is a baby.
(写这故事时,官方还没把7.8级改成8级)
[ 本帖最后由 小小小鲸鱼 于 2008-6-6 12:19 编辑 ] |
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