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[中学生读书] 一起来写读书笔记之---记忆传授者(the giver)

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71#
发表于 2013-7-21 17:00:09 | 只看该作者
对了,忘了赞了,孩子们写的真棒!
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72#
发表于 2013-7-22 14:21:04 | 只看该作者
Chapter 18:
The crowd cheered, as the~ did for you. The new Receiver was puzzled and a little frightened, as you were."(All didn’t change. All the children must have the same feeling because of the special job.)
The Giver hesitated painfully, as if saying the name aloud might be excruciating(The memory gave the Giver treat pain.)
Sometimes I chose one just because I knew it would make her Laugh, and I so treasured the sound of that laughter in this room that had always been so silent.(Being the Receiver of Memory could be lonely, so the laughter of Rosemary mode the Giver felt some company with me and love.)
I was notified by the Speaker that she had gone directly to the Chief Elder and asked to be released." (Rosemary couldn’t stand the pain from the memory anymore.)
For a while they overwhelmed the community. All those feelings! They'd never experienced that before.(I think the people in the book were weak because they didn’t experience the feeling of pain, they couldn’t get stronger from the loss and other feelings.)
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73#
发表于 2013-7-22 18:43:06 | 只看该作者
这些孩子真是了不起,太佩服了,阿姨向你们致敬!
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74#
发表于 2013-7-23 12:10:24 | 只看该作者
读书笔记怎么写法?复述故事情节吗?

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大家自由发挥,重在参与  详情 回复 发表于 2013-7-23 12:11
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75#
发表于 2013-7-23 12:23:39 | 只看该作者
Chapter 19:
For a while they overwhelmed the community. All those feelings! They'd never experienced that before.(I think the people in the book were weak because they didn’t experience the feeling of pain, they couldn’t get stronger from the loss and other feelings.)
Jonas hesitated. He was afraid that his father wouldn't like it, if he watched something so private.(Jonas was still following every rule in the community.)
Jonas recognized a scale; he had seen them before, when he'd been doing volunteer hours at the Nurturing Centers(I think they are picking the one who was heavier to live, because that meant the heavier baby was stronger.)
Jonas's father, wearing his nurturing uniform, entered the room, cradling a tiny new child wrapped in a soft blanket in his arms. A uniformed woman followed through the door, carrying a second new child wrapped in a similar blanket.(I think the rule of releasing one of the twins was ridiculous cruel and unfair.)
The Giver commanded in a strange voice.(Why was the Giver a strange voice?)
As he continued to watch, the new child, no longer crying, moved his arms and legs in a jerking motion. Then he went limp. He head fell to the side, his eyes half open. Then he was still.(The little baby was now dead.)
With an odd, shocked feeling, Jonas recognized the gestures and posture and expression. They were familiar. He had seen
them before. But he couldn't remember where.(The child’ death night brought Jonas a new feeling, horror.)
"Then she did so. I didn't watch. I looked away."(The love in the Giver’s heart for Rosemary made he couldn’t see it anymore.)
Jonas felt a ripping sensation inside himself, the feeling of terrible pain clawing in way forward to emerge in a cry.(Many things, like the feeling for his father ,was changing in Jonas’s heart.)
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发表于 2013-7-24 10:47:57 | 只看该作者
Chapter 20:
"I will take care of that, sir. I will take care of that, sir, Jonas mimicked in a cruel, sarcastic voice. "I will do whatever you like. sir. I will kill people, sir. Old people;" Small newborn people! I’d be happy to kill them, sir. Thank you for your instructions, sir. How may I help you. He couldn't seem to stop.(I think Jonas was coming to the edge of his mind.)
Feelings ace not part of the Life she's learned."(I felt pity for Fiona and other members of the community.)
"I've started to share them with you," Jonas said, trying to cheer him.(Jonas had realized his mistake and started to be cheerful again.)
"So if you escape, once you are gone -- and, Jonas, you know that you can never return -- "(I think they were planning to let Jonas leave and make the memories come back to all the people.)
"No. I have to stay here," The Giver said firmly.(I think the Giver still loved the community.)
Jonas went home the next morning, cheerfully greeted his parents, and lied easily about what a busy, pleasant night he had had.(Jonas wasn’t miserable anymore and felt much more cheerful because of their plan.)
His patents would be irritated but not alarmed. They would think him inconsiderate and they would plan to chastise him, later.(Because the people in the book didn’t have any feelings, what would they do was totally obvious.)
Their attention would Nm to the overwhelming task of bearing the memories themselves. The Giver would help them.(I think it’s a good for them to have the memory back, Then they would be smarter and stronger.)
"Her name was Rosemary," The Giver said.(This stunned me. And I know the Giver wanted to be released like her daughter.)

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好幸运啊.  详情 回复 发表于 2013-7-24 10:48
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发表于 2013-7-25 09:04:13 | 只看该作者
Chapter 21:
They could make it work, Jonas told himself again and again throughout the day.(Jonas encouraged himself to make hime feel more confident.)
The family unit was eating together as always: Lily chattering away, Mother and Father making their customary comments (and Lies, Jonas knew) about the day.(I seemed like there were love between each member of the family, but actually there wasn’t any love at all.)
"It's bye-bye to you, Gabe, in the morning," Father had said, in his sweet, sing-song voice.(I am disgusted of Jonas’s father’s fake behavior. He was going to kill a baby and had no sadness about it .)
Gabe snuggled cheerfully as if it were a wrestling game, the kind they had played back in the dwelling, with tickles and laughter.(Gabriel was such a cute and cheerful baby. Jonas’s father was going go kill him. It is lucky that Jonas had saved him.)
Together they became cold; and when the planes were gone, they would shiver, holding each other, until sleep came again.(Memories and feelings could do co much.)

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有点深度了  详情 回复 发表于 2013-7-26 10:16
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发表于 2013-7-25 09:04:33 | 只看该作者
Chapter 22:
The road was narrower, and bumpy, apparently no longer tended by toad crews. It was harder, suddenly, to balance on the bike, as the front wheel wobbled over stones and ruts.(It was harder and harder to keep escaping.)
During his twelve years in the community, he had never felt such simple moments of exquisite happiness.(This escape made Jonas actually experienced all the things he had in his memories.)
Then, when he had had a choice, he had made the wrong one: the choice to leave. And now he was starving.(Jonas was feeling miserable and started to regret about this escape.)
His sprained ankle throbbed as he forced the pedal downward in an effort that was almost beyond him.(Although it was hard, Jonas wasn’t going to give up.)
He wept because he was afraid now that he could not save Gabriel. He no longer cared about himself.(Jonas had strong love for Gabriel.)
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发表于 2013-7-26 08:37:19 | 只看该作者
Chapter 23:
He saw nothing ahead except the endless ribbon of road unfolding in twisting narrow curves. He heard no sound ahead.(The escape was becoming more and more difficult.)
But he had come this far. He must try to go on.(Jonas wasn’t going to give up hope.)
His consciousness grasped at a wisp of another warm memory, and tried desperately to hold it there, to enlarge it, and pass it into Gabriel. His spirits and strength lifted with the momentary warmth and he stood.(Jonas was using his memory, his love for Garbiel, his hope to encourage himself not to give up and keep on trying and going.)
Memories of joy flooded through him suddenly. He reached the place where the hill crested and he could feel the ground under his snow-covered feet become level. It would not be uphill anymore.(The memory of happiness, love, friendship helped Jonas to go through the difficulties.)
But somewhere ahead, through the blinding storm, he knew there was warmth and light.(Jonas was filled with hope and will never give up.)

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80#
发表于 2013-7-26 08:39:36 | 只看该作者
本帖最后由 zhouqing 于 2013-7-26 08:45 编辑

孩子一天一章,这本书终于读完了.不管写得怎么样,这应该是她看得最仔细原版书.
同时也挣了俺23块钱
希望以后还有类似的活动.

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第一个完成的,赞一个  详情 回复 发表于 2013-8-1 23:09
是的,也是一种鼓励.不过不给也是会读的,可能没那么大的积极性.  详情 回复 发表于 2013-7-26 10:16
是一章一元钱吗?  详情 回复 发表于 2013-7-26 09:51
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