下面贴的是女儿第一次课的作业。Wings,多好的主题啊!希望女儿的wings一直伴随着她,更希望Cathy老师的文学课帮孩子们插上更多的wings:想像的wings、思维的wings、心灵的wings。。。
Wings Malika Ndlovu
At five years old I knew I had wings
Children have right to such things
I could fly to places I’d never seen
Believe in the magic of flying
At five I knew I had wings
I knew and I flew
Flying high
I dropped my wings at sixteen
Seventeen or eighteen
When there was no more room for flying
I began to doubt that I ever did
That I ever could
Fly
I lost my wings at twenty-one
When I was supposed to be an adult
Supposed to be achieving
Delivering
Proving
And everyone and everything
Was about judging
When I was supposed to be
Supposed to be
Supposed to
Be
At thirty two
I wasn’t even thinking of wings
I was drowning in thoughts of a million other things
I was thinking of drowning
Drowning
Watching the water rising up over my head
Days when I couldn’t get out of bed
I think I gave up on my wings
I forgot that once
I flew
By forty five I was still alive
But cynical and critical
I had definitely lost faith in flying
Maybe I was too busy thinking about dying
Wings then seemed ridiculous
Childhood things
And I couldn’t remember
The feeling of wings
At sixty-eight
When most people think it’s too late
I began to dream of flying
I thought of how much time I’d lost
And how little I’d lived
How easily I’d given up on my wings
Maybe
Maybe if I went back
To when I was thirty-two
Eighteen
Seventeen
Sixteen
Or five
Maybe if I went to those places
When I knew I had wings
I would begin to remember
The magic
The innocence
Of wings and such things
Maybe then I would remember
And forget about dying
And maybe then
Once again
I could fly
Fly
CLOSE READING:
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Read the poem aloud 3 times.
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From which grammatical person (1st, 2nd, 3rd person singular or plural) is the poem written?
First person singular.
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Why did the poet choose this perspective? Because it made the poem more realistic. When using this perspective, the author can tell us what his real feeling is, but if he chose the other two perspectives, he can only tell us what the person in the poem is doing instead of what he is feeling. A smart answer Alice!Well deduced!
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Is it effective?
Why? Yes, it’s very effective. Real feelings are always effective. Because when telling a true story about yourself, it’s easy to express your feelings and put them into the lines of the poem. So the poem will be full of emotions and can touch people’s hearts if it’s written from this perspective.
I like this answer.I’d like you now to start thinking about how the poem is effective in revealing the feelings.What are the devices used by the poet to guide the reader to understanding these feelings?
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Who is the speaker of the poem?
Why do you say so? I think the speaker is an old man. Firstly, I noticed the phrase “At sixty-eight”. A person that is older than sixty-eight is likely to say that he is “At sixty-eight”. Secondly, I think the reason he wrote this poem is because the old man wanted to tell us not to follow the path he had taken, according to his experience, and never forget about our wings -- our imagination and creativity.
Sound logic, aptly supported!
Who is the audience?
How do you know? I think the audience is the teenagers. Because children are too young to understand what the poem is talking about, and adults are already too old. Their “wings” are already lost. But as for teenagers, there is still a lot they can do to save their “wings”. They still have imagination. But at this age, they began to think that imagination is just “ridiculous, childhood things.” And they have so much homework to do that they have no more room for “flying”. So the author tried to tell the teenagers not to forget about their imagination.
Excellent answer!Sad though, isn’t it?
Does this poem have rhythm and rhyme?
Justify your answer. Yes. A lot of words at the end of each line rhyme. Such as “wings” and “things”, “sixteen” and “eighteen”, “eight” and “late”, “Five” and “alive” and so on…
Why is it called Wings? It’s because wings symbolizes imagination. If a person has wings, he would be able to fly to anywhere in the world. Imagination can take you to those places too. Also, if you don’t have imagination, you won’t believe you can fly.
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What is the literal (exact and factual), and figurative
(symbolic, metaphorical, abstract) meaning of
‘wings’
in the context of the poem? The literal meaning of wings is: things that can let you fly. The figurative meaning is: imagination, creativity. Yes!
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How does the speaker feel about the impact of
age on her/his ability to fly? Children have a lot of imagination, so they can fly high, and they can fly to anywhere they want. But as years go by, they will start to think flying is a ridiculous thing. Finally, as adults, they will lose their ability to fly. At an old age, they will once again wish that they could be young again and soar in the sky of imagination.
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What diction (a poet’s use of words) is used to evoke the feeling of flying?
(find a few words and say how they evoke the feeling of flying….. The word “magic” evoked the author’s memories of his youth, when he still has the ability to fly high.
The word “innocence” tells us when he is flying, he turned five again, no more work and things to do, just an innocent child happily flying in his own world of imagination. What connotations do these words have for you personally? When a poet chooses a word – he/she does so in order to create a specific effect, some of which will be unintended – for example – you and I will have a different feeling and understanding of the word ‘innocence’!
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Does the tone (atmosphere, feeling, ambience, mood) of the poem change?
If yes, describe the tone and how it changes.
If no, say what you think the tone is and why you think it does not change. Yes. In the First stanza, when the writer can fly, he is delighted and happy. The stanzas that followed gave me a more heavy feeling; it made me feel sorry for the writer. Then, in the last two stanzas, the sad and regretful feeling has reached the top.
Was there perhaps a feeling of hope at the end? There is a saying – ‘It’s not over till the fat lady sings…’
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Do you think any significant ages and stages have been omitted from the poem? If so, which ages?
If not – why not? No, I think all the significant ages have been written. Sometimes, you don’t have to write every single age. You only have to write about a few important stages in life—child, teenager, adult, and old person. That’ll summarize all the different stages of development. And this poem has them all.
At a level I agree with you. However, does everyone go through the same stages? Are they all likely to lose their wings at the same time? What could cause some people to lose their wings earlier, or later? Do you think some people never lose their wings? Can you think of examples?
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Do you agree with the sentiments (opinions, feelings) expressed in the poem?
Do people forget about their wings?
Why do they?
Yes. People do forget about their wings because they are too busy thinking about other things or under too much pressure. So, they don’t have time and space for flying. If they don’t use their wings in a long period of time, they’ll slowly forget that they still have wings.
Sad isn’t it?
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How can you ensure that you never forget about your wings?
I will not put myself under too much pressure. I would go to concerts often, because music can purify the soul. I won’t watch too much TV, because it will make my imagination slowly fade away, instead, I will read more books. Books would send me into a magic land of “wings”. Without the picture, I can imagine things into whatever I like, and I’ll be able to soar in the sky of imagination.
I sincerely hope you never forget about your wings Alice. Sometimes just sitting somewhere quietly and reflecting is also a way of ensuring you remain aware of your wings. Being conscious is paramount!
Well done Alice!You read the poem closely and answered well.We are working towards how poems achieve the effects on the reader that they do and you have made an excellent start. Always keep in the front of your mind, that a (good) poet chooses every single word with extreme care.
Alice, Sunny, Wendy
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I was not initially going to present you with a writing activity in the first week, but your responses today have persuaded me to offer you the following activity
to try:
Writing:
Either:
Write an additional stanza (paragraph) for this poem from the perspective of any age you choose.
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