看了安琪儿妈妈的总结,谈到作文问题,想起来贴两篇希希去年写的作文,学SBS的时候,作文就是教仿写,我觉得是个可以尝试的起步的方法,不过我们是老师教的,女儿写的时候我发现她还是中文思路,带着点翻译的味道,这个可能以后会慢慢扭转的。
A Special Meal
On my 7th birthday, my good friend Jerry and I went to a nice restaurant for dinner. We sat at a quiet comfortable table in the corner. We looked at the menu and then we ordered dinner. For an appetizer, I ordered a bowl of chicken soup, and he ordered a bowl of tomato soup. For the main course, we ordered meatball with spaghetti.
These foods were all delicious. We were very full and we couldn't have dessert any more. We enjoyed our dinner very much. We had a wonderful birthday evening.
这篇是学习过去时的时候仿写的,看得出整篇都是突出过去时的运用。
My Favorite Food My favorite food is yogurt. In fact, I eat it all the time. My mother tells me that yogurt is good for our health. I think it's very delicious. I ate it yesterday. I'm eating it right now. I'm going to eat it tomorrow. As you can see, I really like to eat yogurt. 这篇是学习一般现在时。
Shanghai and Guilin
I live in Shanghai. The city is large and beautiful. Many buildings are high.But lots of streets are dirty and noisy, the bus system is not reliable.
Last winter vacation I went to Guilin. The city is smaller but more beautiful and the streets are cleaner and quieter. It has more relibale bus system.
Although I was happy in Guilin and I liked it very much, I like Shanghai much more. Because the people in Shanghai are nicer than the people in Guilin.
这篇是学习形容词比较级。
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