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09-12-24 星期四
把放博客里的这篇贴过来,希望坛子里的高手们给指点一下,俺水平差,说得不对的地方也看不出来
今天,我们去了澳大利亚。
主人公还是little mouse、beaver和Irene。
Beaver起得最早,然后叫醒了little mouse和Irene。Little mouse doesn’t want breakfast on the boat, so they take some snacks with them, then they are off.
As usual, little mouse falls into the water again, Beaver throw him a rope at him and pull him out of the water. Little mouse was all wet, he felt chilly. Beaver get some clothes for him to change, Irene got some hot milk for littlee mouse. Little mouse said:“Oh, cows give us milk.”After milk, he felt better and gets warm.
As soon as they arrived the land, they saw a big fire, a boy is in a fire! How danger he is! Just then they heard a siren of the fire engine! The firefighter hold out the hose to the fire, but the hose is too heavy, so a few firefighter come and help. They sprayed the water and saved the boy, the fire is put out! They stopped the fire!
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Little mouse was stuck in rocks, so did beaver. How could they do? Little mouse is good at digging, he made a hole, they crawled through the hole, but it is too dark there, they can’t see anything! Little mouse said:“ we need candles!”“Yes, that’s is a good idea! But we have not matches. How can we light the candles on without match?”“But Irene knows magic!”Little mouse said.
So Irene sent them a lighter , they lit the candles on, now they can see. Little mouse handed out the candles,“One is for me, one is for beaver, and the one is for Irene.”
Suddenly little mouse blew his candle and dropped it onto the ground, beaver said:“Oh, little mouse, you are so careless! But don’t worry, mine is still on.”
And then, beaver blew his candle down, “Oh, I’m always keep talking, so that’s why. ” …then they saw the light in front of them, tne end of the hole is near! They kept crawling, Irene throw them a rope and pull the little mouse out of the hole, but beaver was still in the hole. Little mouse and Irene threw the rope to the beaver again. They pulled and pulled, beaver felt a little rock dropped on his head, he cried:“Oh no! It hurts!” beaver didn’t know what it is. Then another, dropped on the beaver’s head, beaver said,“why does it always happen to me? That’s strange, it felt like soft and a little bit warm. What’s that?”
It’s little mouse! Naughty mouse!
最后,他们又都回到了船上,都累极了。
还见到了Irene的妈妈、爸爸,Beaver的妈妈爸爸,大家一起吃了晚饭,互道晚安睡觉去了。
End!
祝大家圣诞快乐!天天好心情!
[ 本帖最后由 Irene2005 于 2009-12-24 21:43 编辑 ] |
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