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上次元元看了hyi发的tiger's tale 后，就很想创作她自己的故事。星期五晚上元元就已经完成了写作。我今天下午才抽空打印出来。打印时粗略地和元元一块纠正了一下语法错误和拼写错误。元元除了写学校要求的自我介绍，几乎没有用英文写作过，这个算是第一次了。
故事的主人公的名字都是元元平时听故事时最喜欢的女孩名字，这次她特意把这些名字都放在了一起：） 故事有点长，从中能看出元元的心智水平
Going out to play! ---tricking Mariposa
In a very big town, there is a big playground. Every evening, all the children in the town go out to play. Georgina, Susanna and Sarah are best friends. They always play with each other. They are popular，kind
and friendly. But sometimes they are naughty too. They always try to joke some children.
One evening, it was only 6 o’clock, and Georgina was outside already. She planned something, so she phoned Susanna. But Susanna was not at home, then she phoned Sarah.
“Hello, can I speak to Sarah?” Georgina said.
“This is Sarah speaking.” Sarah answered.
“Can you go out to play?” Georgina asked.
“Sure! I am coming right away” Sarah put down the phone and walked out of the house.
After a few minutes, Sarah appeared at the playground.
“I have a plan,” said Georgina with a smile on her face.
“Do you hate mariposa?” Georgina asked.
“Sure, everybody doesn’t like her!” answered Sarah, wondering why Georgina asked this question.
“Yeah, she is the naughtiest girl in the whole town!” Georgina said.
“You mean in the whole world!” Sarah added thoughtfully.
But Georgina didn’t listen and said “She is naughty, selfish, mean, but she always thinks that she is the best girl in the whole town!”
“So, what’s your plan?” Sarah asked.
Georgina smiled again and whispered to Sarah’s ear: “Before, when we said she was mean, we always said it behind her. Now, we can say it when she can hear us!”
“BUT HOW?!” Sarah asked surprised.
So Georgina took out a piece of paper and wrote : Mariposa =Ann.
“What does that mean?” asked Sarah curiously.
“Oh, that means we just use “Ann”, not use “Mariposa” to call Mariposa, and Mariposa hates Ann, everybody knows that !”
”That’s a good idea!” said Sarah.
So the two girls phoned Mariposa.
Sometime later, Mariposa ran towards Georgina and Sarah, holding a beautiful red ball. Sarah thought the ball was very beautiful, so she came closer to Mariposa and touched the ball.
“Stop! It’s My ball, I just bought it and I don’t want anyone to touch it !” Mariposa said crossly and she pulled Sarah away. Sarah sadly went away.
“Where is Georgina?” said Mariposa.
“I am right here!” answerd Georgina.
Then Mariposa pointed to the house which was behind Georgina, “Look, there is a fool!”, Georgina turned to look at it, but nobody there!
“Ha ha ha ha……” laughed Mariposa: “You are the fool !”
“Ha ha ha ha ha …”Mariposa laughed even louder.
Sarah and Georgina were angry, but they did not said anything, because they had a plan.
“I want to go to the bathroom.” said Mariposa: “wait a moment and I will be right back.” and then she went.
At that time, Susanna, Catherine, Maggie and 5 other children came to play. They were not happy when they saw Sarah and Georgina were playing with Mariposa, because everybody does’t like her.
“Why are you playing with Mariposa?” asked Catherine. Then, Georgina whispered something to her ear, and Catherine laughed and told all the other children to hide behind the tree .And then, Mariposa was back.
“Mariposa, do you hate somebody in the town?” asked Georgina except she already knew she hated Ann. Everybody knows that!
“Of couse I do!” said Mariposa.
”Who?” asked Georgina.
“Ann!” Mariposa said crossly.
“Why do you hate her?” asked Sarah.
“She is bad! Once she put a lot of salt into my rice and I almost cried !” explained Mariposa.
Georgina and Sarah almost laughed, because she said herself was bad and put a lot of salt to a child’s rice! But they didn’t laugh.
“You know what, I sometimes hate her too!” said Sarah, “She is bad, mean, naughty, short, thin like bones, selfish and ugly!”
But Mariposa is not too foolish. “Thin? Ann is not thin, she is fat ! And she is not ugly! It seemed this Ann you talked about is just like …like … like …ME!”
And at exactly the moment, all the children who had hidden behind the tree jumped out, “It is YOU !” they all said and they sang out loud : “ Mariposa is selfish, ugly, bad, naughty, short and thin like bones”
Mariposa cried! This was the first time I saw her crying!
And at that time her father was looking for her , “Ha, you are here, why did’t you go home at 8 PM, I told you that !” her father said angrily, and he took Mariposa who was still crying home.
And after that, Mariposa is not selfish anymore.
Writer: 元元
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