Sunny的第一篇英语作文

新新唐人

前日晚饭后，sunny突然提出要写一篇英语文章，我们当然很高兴，鼓励她能马上写出来。作文一气呵成，这是她自学习英语以来首次写作，虽然有好多错误，但我们还是由衷的为她高兴。

以下是她的文章：

                    A  Snowboy     (sunny)

One day, rabbit's mum said to her child:"little bunny,I'll pick some mashroom,and you can make a snowman.No,I'll make a snowboy,and play with him."little bunny said."Okey,but don't go away from home." mum said."of cause." said naughty little bunny."good bye.bye mum."

"First ,I'll roll two diffirent round balls for my snowboy."little bunny thinked. then,it  had been finished ."second I'll put the small one onto the big one" little bunny thinked.

The snowboy's body had been finished ,little bunny  went back home and got tweleve black buttons and one carrot,then goes out. She put two buttons on boy's head to make his eyes ,then put the carrot into his head to make his nose,and put ten buttons to make his mouth. At last  she bent two branches and put into his body to make his arms .

So the snowboy was finished. She was very happy for her snowboy .

sunny请袁老师修改指正，谢谢。

[ 本帖最后由 新新唐人 于 2008-12-24 18:00 编辑 ]

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原帖由 新新唐人 于 2008-12-24 12:22 发表
前日晚饭后，sunny突然提出要写一篇英语文章，我们当然很高兴，鼓励她能马上写出来。作文一气呵成，这是她自学习英语以来首次写作，虽然有好多错误，但我们还是由衷的为她高兴。

以下是她的文章：

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唐人：sunny是谁？是男是女？几岁了？是不是你的孩子？不交待清楚读者就会有许多疑问。
她的中文名是什么？

新新唐人

KING ARTHUR

Once upon a time , there was an old woman . She didn’t like to work hard, but she like pancakes very much . She had a baby ,the baby was a boy , the boy was three ears old .

One day , she and the boy saw a man eating a pancake in a restaurant . She was very hungry , so she left the boy alone and ran into the restaurant to buy the pancake , but when she went out , the boy was missing .

She was so sad because the boy was missing , then she said “I will never eat pancakes and do the hard-work .’’After that she found a new job , the job was hard and she can only use the breaktime to find the boy .

After fifteen years , when she was doing the hard work she thought “My son should be 18 years old , but I can’t find him .’’ So she cried and cried , but her boss was angry and let her go , because she didn’t work . she cried too loudly . The new king heard the noise and came to the woman to see what happened , but when he came to the woman , he reconized she was his mother , the woman recognized him too , so they hugged each other and cried .

She asked her son why he became a king . let me tell you why ,a man see the boy so he adopt the boy ,the man called the boy arthur , he was a retired cook ,so he wanted arthur became a cook too,he told arthur how to cook， how to read and other things . arthur learned how to cook very quickly , he became a good cook , and became a strong man too.the man had a restaurant , arthur worked in the restaurant , so the restaurant became the most famous one .

A lucky thing happened , the former king had a daughter , the king wanted the princess to marry someone , the princess was more beautiful than every girl , everyone wanted to marry her .the princess liked soup very much , so she said “I must marry some one who cook the best .’’ the princess and the king heard that arthur was the best cook , so they let arthur into the palace to cook for the princess ,when the princess drank the soup , she was surprised , she had not eaten soup better than this . she said to arthur“you are the best cook .’’the king drank the soup too , (bcause he wants to check the soup weather it was the best ) he was sooooooo surprised that he drank the soup and fell asleep three days . then he woke up . when he woke up ,he said to arthur“I believe you are the best cook , you can marry my daughter .’’ then they married , and lived happily ever after .

(sunny  9岁 2009.11)

huge57

Sunny又进步了，高兴！

新新唐人

sunny的英语得益于袁老师。谢谢袁老师！
老美说sunny的英语很地道，会发很多中国人不会的咬舌头"th"音。
sunny说是袁老师教的。