标题: 写作批改：关于未来 [打印本页] 作者: 谷雨 时间: 2014-12-17 07:21 标题: 写作批改：关于未来 题目：写一段有关未来的话。你认为未来将发生什么？你持乐观的态度还是悲观的态度？ 作者: 谷雨 时间: 2014-12-17 19:11
原文：I am optimistic about the future, I believe that technology will advance in the next one hundred years. There will be more people driving electric cars. Many things will be used with electric. Many people are looking forward to the future. In the future, robots will do a lot of things that is dangerous for humans, for example, collecting herbs on a high mountain. So I think the future will be very nice. 作者: 谷雨 时间: 2014-12-17 19:36 本帖最后由 谷雨 于 2014-12-17 19:39 编辑
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I am optimistic about the future, because I believe that the technology will advance in the next one hundred years. There will be more people driving electric cars. Many things will be used with electric. Many people are looking forward to the future. In the future, robots will do a lot of things that is dangerous for humans, for example, collecting herbs on a high mountain. So I think the future will be very nice. 作者: 谷雨 时间: 2014-12-17 19:40
教师留言：
Thank you for your submission. It was interesting to read your write up. You have written very well for this level. Well done. Keep up the good work. 1. The definite article “the” is used to refer to a particular thing where the writer and reader both know which thing is being referred to. Example: the technology. 2. Please review your work to check spelling errors and missing words before submitting. Example: and. Try to read more English books, newspapers or magazines to help familiarize yourself with written English. Good luck with your studies.Remember to use a Grammar Guide for help with your assignments.作者: xjchen517 时间: 2015-1-12 14:35
大学生对the的用法也是头疼啊！